Black Ice (working title)

Well, grammar and spelling errors are important to me—and don't hesitate to inform me of them. However, what I need at this time is feedback on just about everything, especially description and plot. I went to know what keeps you or stops you from reading and if you can feel the world as if you were the characters themselves. I am open to feedback on my characters as well, all I ask is that you are polite and honest in your reviews.