The night brightness

Your smile is the symbol of brightness, so it make everything bright....doesnt matter if it day or night, Christmas or famine, war or peace....1 perfect smile can ruin every sadness within a spark..

Sparks fly, light beams in the sky
Comets and shooting stars shine in the high

Galaxies of shining stars take our eyes away
In their reflection, the muddy pies shine all way

Dark shadows under the tree and moon image in the pond
Takes our heart and the wonderful nature and forms in a bond

These are the beauties of the night
And the darkest time of our daily sight

Now i wonder, deeply for a while,
When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???

Author's Note

i dnt knw if u guys will like it or not, i just wanted to put an art of happiness in this poem and drive all of ur sadness though it.....hope u will enjoy it......

Reviews

[Sanjh]

another nice poem from you Annabelle. Beautiful it is, keep it up...:)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

Its really mesmerizing. I wanted to read more but it ended soon :(

[Tasfia Islam]

This is the suspense of poetry..... your thirst never stops in reading more and more.... :)

[Fariha Tahseen Karim]

true!!!!!!

[DoormanDan]

You are officially a poetry GOD in my eyes. your writing is 100 percent unique and i can tell you put Lots of effort into your beautiful, no, majestic, wait, DIVINE poetry!

[DoormanDan]

Oh, and happy early birthday!

[Tasfia Islam]

Oh My God..... This is the best review I ever got....... Thank you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much..... I never thought that someone will love my poems this much....... I'm so glad that u loved it ..... :) This review literally made my day....... Thank you once again.....

[DoormanDan]

No problem!

[Emily]

I like the any you have the poem set up.
It's a great poem!
Well done!

[Nitesh Mahabal]

Wonderful Vision Maam and U ended it so well.
When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???
Nice

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you so much..... I'm glad u liked it.... :)

[Nitesh Mahabal]

hhhhmmmmm :)

[TheLostMind]

Ah.. The brightness of the night, brought alive.. :).. There was a time when I used to stare at the endless sky, studded with stars and dream.. No time now-a-days ...

I think there is one minor spelling mistake..
"When darkness have such beauties, y do we wait for the brightness to smile???"
Shouldn't it be "has"? :P.

A really good write.. :)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thanks to inform me about the correction.... :) And I'm really glad that u liked it..... :)

[Valkyrie Warrior]

Hey Annabelle this is great keep up the good work

[Tasfia Islam]

thank you very much... :)

[free will]

Very true, the peaceful beauty of the night...I like how you've expressed that in this piece ;)

[Tasfia Islam]

Thank you.... :)

[Kuldeep desai]

its really good, your imagination power is great..........

[Tasfia Islam]

thankyou so much......