All of Me

Just something I came up with! Let me know what you guys think :)

My life...

My heart...

My soul...

My body...

My everything...

Every last piece of me you take...

You toy... you taste...you devour...

You own...                                                                                        

I fight... I defy... but you...

You still have me...

Trapped within your deadly grip...

It can't be love...

Love doesn't hurt this much

So what is it? 

It's wrong...

It hurts... 

And yet... I can't resist...

And yet... I crave more

I want your touch...

I want your kiss...

I want you... I need you... but it's wrong, so wrong.

I'm a slave, destined to fulfill your desires.

Destined to be yours and no one else's

Call it love... call it an obligation... call it what you will

I'm yours and no one else's

No matter how hard I resist...

I'm yours and no one else's

Author's Note

Let me know what you think! :)

Reviews

[Hebe]

Fantastic ... love the passion, you outdid yourself here!

[Tashida]

Thanks Hebe :) :) It means a lot!!!!! :D

[KnightsEye]

Very well done, I love the passion and meaning you put into the words, it tells a story about the struggle to find the difference between love and enslavement.
Thumbs up for sure!

[Tashida]

Thank you very much! It means alot :)

[Makrix Mottle]

Very interesting, leaves the reader with wondering

[JoeM]

I found it frightening at the thought of the surrendering portrayed. Very well done, though.

[Tashida]

Thank you! It just came out... I normally don't write poems like this, but after reading all of the amazing poems on here, I guess you could say I felt inspired.

Once again, thank you!

[Brandon Wernke]

This is beautiful in its destructive sadness. I don't know whether to pity the protagonist or admire their devotion. I could feel the emotion when I read it, and I think that points to a very good piece. :)

[Tashida]

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it

[Sira YR]

OMG Tashida this is so beautiful. Great Job!

[Tashida]

Thank you Raysira! Glad you liked it :)

[Sira YR]

So who's it about lol? :)

[Tashida]

lol does it have to be about anyone?

[Sira YR]

umm mmhm lol :) oh and i have ur pencil :)

[Tashida]

lol well no one in particular and ik u do

[Sira YR]

ok whatever u say :)

[Tashida]

lol :) I do say

[Sira YR]

suuuuurre u do :)