A warm welcome

For the celebration of opening of my new group.

A welcome is sweet 

lovely as a flower 

delightful as the wind 

it taste like cocoa 

on a frosty cold night 

along with the tang of love 

its smile is a sticky beauty 

so thick as honey 

it calls to peoples hearts 

could it be yours,

or could be mine?

Author's Note

Enjoy, for the occasion of my new group. Please review! =)

Reviews

[zainul]

Wonderful write.
Really enjoyable.

[Tavionna]

Thank you =)

[zainul]

You are welcome =)

[Rose]

That's very sweet. It's a lovely poem. It reveals that you are willing to openly welcome people, even those you don't know.

[critic h]

Good use. It seemed eating a delicacy.

[Tavionna]

Thank you =)

[Mermaidstear]

very cute ! :)

[Tavionna]

Thank you, you are so nice =)

[Mermaidstear]

pleasure is all mine :) Keep writing :)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

this is really sweet.
Keep it up :).
100/100

[Tavionna]

Thank you, =)

[Andrew (MJ) Nugteren]

no problem

[Mayur Sadhu]

Cocoa on a frosty cold night = YUMMY = the poem.
Small, funny poem. Loved it.

[Tavionna]

Thanks, i do miss having it here in japan though. =)