The Robin (By My 8yr old Sister)

Her name is Amari she told me she was going to write a poem and she wanted me to put it on here so here it is she wants honest feedback from everyone who reads it

The sky is blue
The robin is red
He made a home upon my head
He pulls my hair
He thinks its a worm
"Oh silly birdie"
He becomes my friend
He comes by everyday
I named him Titan
I don't know why
One day he didn't come by to play
I got worried and lonely
I went out and searched for him
I look in the tree
Guess who I see
Titan has a family
Titan swooped down
He introduced to his wife and 3 kids
I named the wife Mya
The son Freddy
And the two daughters Kim and Niasia
From that day on I stopped by everyday
To say "Hey"
To my friend the robin

Reviews

[Emily]

I love it!
Tell your sister to keep up the great work!

[Tayauna Hargrove]

Her name is Amari she told me she was going to write a poem and she wanted me to put it on here so here it is she wants honest feedback from everyone who reads it