I Don't Want to Die....

Nobody here notices me.

I'm just that shadow with

The bleeding wrists,

The tear-stained eyes that

Never stop searching.

Searching for a different ending to

This broken story.

The pages are torn and stained by

A blood red liquid,

Dripping from these wrists.

There must be a different ending.

I'm too scared to take the risk, to

Empty my heart of blood.

These tear-stained eyes keep searching, but

There is no other way.

Reviews

[MoriartyMesa]

I wiser man than me once said, G.M.F. was his initials. Wrote a quote in a series I love.

"I will assure you, shadows always have substance, and that is the very substance that is far more clever than the next fellow"


Just food for thought.

[Victoria Elizabeth]

Don't you ever think that your not wanted, I'm sure everyone on Writerscafe would miss you...I would

[hoffstetter]

damn, taylor, this is really good. very emotional. pretty much the story of my life. nice work :DDD

[Kiara]

Thank you :)

[hoffstetter]

haha no prob :)

[Raminta]

Really emotional poem, reminds me of my own imperfections. We all search for an escape rote out of are own shallowed self and this poem really visualises the suffering. And again very emotional and intimate poem to share. Well done.