Monotonous Torture

Monotonous Torture

A Poem by Kiara

I need someone to raise their voice.
I need someone to scream.
I need someone to use their fist.
I need someone to take a swing.

I cannot keep up with them.
This monotonous torture is killing me.
I need to be free of them.
Forever, I beg to be free.

© 2013 Kiara


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Love your enthusiasm!! I DON'T Love that I can't do it in front of you to allow you an example of joining in, and getting out what haunts you. : ) You make me want to pound my desk reading this. lol Your "About Me" reads like mine would except for the lipstick and some sort of "obvious" things like that. : ) The poem? I couldn't punch you..... because you are 16 and this site would frown on me saying I wish I could punch you if it felt good to you. lol Nope... can't do it. About 90% of my poems are about me, so feel free to run around in my circus whenever you wish!! : ) Love the last line, Taylor... that's what made me comment. xoxo -Mark





Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Love your enthusiasm!! I DON'T Love that I can't do it in front of you to allow you an example of joining in, and getting out what haunts you. : ) You make me want to pound my desk reading this. lol Your "About Me" reads like mine would except for the lipstick and some sort of "obvious" things like that. : ) The poem? I couldn't punch you..... because you are 16 and this site would frown on me saying I wish I could punch you if it felt good to you. lol Nope... can't do it. About 90% of my poems are about me, so feel free to run around in my circus whenever you wish!! : ) Love the last line, Taylor... that's what made me comment. xoxo -Mark





Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..