You'll Get What You Deserve

You deserve nothing more than you have.

You deserve nothing more than you'll get.

You're a failure at everything.

Just wait until you push them all away.

No one is going to see you.

No one is going to care.

Soon they'll be gone.

Soon no one will care.

It should all be over soon.

We all know you don't deserve to die,

But that's exactly what you'll do.

Now just don't be scared to try.

Reviews

[Bowers]

wonderful, again a deep message conveyed through emotional words that I will never fail to relate to, and I thank you for your work, the words you so effortlessly it seems have written. its amazing how you can give a poem as such.
"we all know you dont deserve to die,
but thats exactly what you'll do.
Now just don't be scared to try."
very powerful, don't be scared to try, almost as if we shouldnt be scared of death itself, of letting go, to a better place.. or is it even better?
very thought provoking!