I Expect Nothing From You

How am I supposed to be perfect?

You always tell people that I'm not worth it.

Just point out my flaws.

Show them your disappointment in me.

Tell everyone about my mistakes.

Just push me to the edge and I'll hide the way my heart aches.

I should be used to this,

You do it every chance you get.

What makes you think you have a right to this?

Why do you get to make me feel like I'm worthless?

A mother should be there to help,

But you only push me closer to the edge.

I'm tired of holding it all in,

Because either way I know you'll win.

Why can't I show some weakness?

Why can't I finally fight back?

Reviews

[Paula]

Wow! At first I thought the poem was about an abusive lover but you really turned everything around in the third strophe, which I loved. The poem shows real emotion and is very touching. For my personal "taste", the poem would have sounded better if you just left out the first line, but thats just me. :) Keep on!

[Bowers]

This is amazing, incredible. It truly is, as though you've taken the words right out of my mouth. Very talented you are, I appreciate this write immensely... a deep feeling is portrayed here. Great write.