Stillness

In these cold calm nights

The leaves all fall.

Crunch, crunch.

Under feet they crush.

Leaves of the golden sun,

Leaves of a flickering flame,

Leaves of bright red blood

Are destroyed and left forever dead.

A second is a minute.

A minute lasts an hour.

On these calm cold nights

He watches me cower.

Puff, his foul breath attacks the air.

Laughter,

His laughter

Sends chills

Down my back.

Is he really there?

Help me, please help me.

He's there, in the tree.

During these calm cold nights

He's always watching me.

Reviews

[Sunflower]

I thinking i can figure out what the end is about, i love this one. very nice write

[Sophie]

I loved this! It was amazing and well written. I could imagine everything you wrote. Beautiful. You obviously have insane talent :)

[Kim's Poems]

Love this, I can feel someone standing there watching.
Awesome writing job here.