Utterly Alone

I shiver

And I shake.

I'm look bad,

Like I was caught in an earthquake.

The chilled air

Caresses my frozen skin

As I stand outside your house,

Waiting to be let in.

My emotions come flooding out

And all my tears spill.

I need you to come here,

My medicine, my pill.

Without you,

What am I?

Who have I become?

Is this how I'll die,

Utterly alone?

Reviews

[¥Miss.¥ §M..]

Very sad and emotional, really gives off a feeling of fear, I like this, very good. Great wording and flow.

[Daenerys]

I'm gonna die alone :'( *sobs miserably* jkjk really sad poem though.