My Thoughts....

My Thoughts....

A Poem by Kiara

Sometimes when the pain's too hard to bear
And you wish someone would care,
You find yourself thinking why am I here?
And you shed yet another tear.
You thought all your tears were gone
And that the sun could dawn
And shed its light upon you,
But no one's feelings are true.
All that everyone says is a lie
And now you should just say goodbye
To them all,
For they were your downfall.
They made you cry,
And made you want to die.
They made you feel this way,
So now you can pay.
Give up everything
And just stop breathing.
Give up everything
And  just stop living.

© 2012 Kiara


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Very emotional piece about deception and the thought and feelings found within those perceptions. Absolutely marvelous (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a sweet, and Sorrowful poem at the same time. It sends chills and waves of sorrow down your spine, while all the while, it desperately Cries out to be loved.
Beautiful Write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..