Let the Bullet Fly

Pull the trigger.

Drag the knife

Across your arm.

Just end this pain.

 

 

 

Sorrowful heart,

Be put to rest.

Let the knife

Or the bullet

End your misery.

You brought it

Upon yourself.

The love of your life

Can’t even spare

A single glance

In your direction.

Life has already

Left you lonely.

You have no other choice.

Let the gun take                  it

From here.  It will                be

So much easier.                     You

Can actually be happy        for

Once.   Just listen to the voice

In your head.  It won’t harm you.  Take the knife.

Draw it across your wrists.  Let your body grow

Weak and numb.  Take the gun.  Pull the trigger.

Let the gunshot be heard throughout the house.

End your pain.  It can’t be doing you any harm.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[♋ Iris ♋]

I like the set up and the picture of how the words are written out. Great write too. Very relatable. Good job ^_^

[Charile]

Wow. Great job.

[† Allybear!!! &d..]

i love the deep darkness to which you express urself. Wonderful write :)

[shunik]

imagery makes it as a whole wonderful composition
=]

[Kiara]

The thing i was aiming for (haha, get it?) in this one was for the poem to look like a gun shooting a bullet

[Philip Smith]

Lot's of pain and emotion in this one, I like the short simple yet effective lines. Well done

[quarintine_deathangel]

Great write, however, watch Rise against's Fall children Make it Stop then read this and I doubt you won't shed a tear. Suicide is a simple and permanent solution to a temporary problem. DON"T EVER DO IT! I've watched close freinds harm themselves through this and many people watch their best freinds die from this. There are better ways of doing things and this is really sickening, there is help for people who need it, care from those who are kindhearted and loving and if anyone ever needed help, I and people like me have and will help care for and carry those who need it. Please don't ever think you have no one, there is a reason why good souls exist and I smile to those who are sad and hold a hand out to those in need of a lift.

[Chris Yip]

Good poem short sentences and straight to the point. Raw but well thought out, no nonsense about suicide!! Well done, keep the good work up and congrats on your awards!!

[Chris Yip]

Good poem short sentences and straight to the point. Raw but well thought out, no nonsense about suicide!! Well done, keep the good work up and congrats on your awards!!