Dark Rider

The wind calls my name.

I ride in the rain,

In your direction.

I will ride, untamed

Until I reach my destination.

I dismount my dark horse,

A hate-filled evil force.

I step towards you,

Shaking, full of remorse.

You know you won't be forgiven, too.

I step to the ground

With hardly a sound.

You cower in fear

And you know you've been found

As I come near.

I draw out my sword,

As I step toward

You, my sword shining in the moon.

Your life is all I can afford.

I must be a silent spreading tune.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Chris Yip]

Excellent poem with rhymes that sound throughout it. Well done!! Interesting poem that tells of a warrior with a sword on a horse. Not too long and not too short, just the right length of read. Your style is developing and you have reached a high level writing skill. Do continue and congrats on your awards.

[Jordan's Back]

You please me, You shall write my bibes. you are my favorite minon, for you speak words of delight to me.