I Know I Love You

Why don’t you believe me

When I say I love you?

You meant the whole world to me,

But now it’s just a memory.

The time goes by

And I sit and cry.

I miss you so.

Why did you go?

Now my heart is shattered

Because of you, the only one that mattered.

I need you to come back

And set my life on track.

I need you to forgive my mistake.

I promise, it’s the last I’ll ever make.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[Philip Smith]

You write like you know my life story. Very good and sad. I feel your pain, this seems like it's not exactly fiction but based on a true life event. You write from your heart and that is good for your soul, but be careful of demons that creep back into your life. Have you read some of my stories about my time in prison?

[shunik]

the thing is
you made it good =]

[♋ Iris ♋]

Love this~! Great write Tay~!

[Jacob Mann]

A simple yet effective achy breaky poem. Good job!

[Chris Yip]

Excellent! Well done, your best one so far I think, simple but heartfelt! a bit of Rhyming involved here which is good. Could become lyrics for a heartbreak song.

[† Allybear!!! &d..]

Aww this is so sweet and sad *hugs*

[ATG]

A very well written poem. It captures the idea of heartbreak perfectly. The poem flowed pretty good and the word choice was good as well. Overall, it was good.

[Zachary_James]

I have no words to say, i think this is amazing. It conveys a message of heartbreak and sadness, loved this..

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I truly love this! Sometimes people won't understand how much we love them. But again great job!! :)