Flaming Hot Jealousy

I'm walking through the hallway,

Overjoyed to see you.

When I spot you,

I smile with elation.

Then... The crowd parts,

Revealing what I didn't see.

She was my friend,

And I tried to stay composed

That night on the phone

When you said she kissed your cheek.

Now, her arm is linked through yours.

It takes everything to hold back my jealous tears.

Reviews

[Sunflower]

i love you Ki

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Very strong emotion!

[Lawrence Parlier]

Very cool stream of consciousness piece. Sorry about the inpiration for it, though.

[Daenerys]

I think I know what this is about because I saw this too as I was walking to Geometry. :( I'm sorry you have to hurt like this. I can relate to this too.

[Finally Fallen]

Very strong emotions in this write i can almost feel the jealousy myself very sad but a very awesome poem