Without You

For some reason, I just can't let go

Happiness is a thing of the past

And I'm just hoping that this pain won't last.

Turn around and walk away.

Leave me here, without delay.

Leave me lonely,

A smack in the face.

You're my only,

My last happy place.

Now there's nowhere to run

And the pain's just begun.

Without you, look at what I've become.

Without you, my smile remains

Forever gone....

Reviews

[shunik]

so emotional yet so true
=]

[Alex Vidmar]

awww... this is so sad... but it's so damn good. Love it.

[Corkee1808]

Amazing.....

[Lovely Soul]

Sad

[Lawrence Parlier]

Sad, but you capture it well.

[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this and it's relatable :D
Great job!

[Eagle Cruagh]

Take my hand.
Without that sign of trust
we are lost from the start.
People will not commit, but they want
friends and love and stuff, but they just
cannot take your hand , in trust.
---- John

[Bidu Ibrahim]

Beautifully sad! Nice read. Thanks for sharing.

[SilentDreamer]

Great flow, sad topic. Nice job.

[Once Loved Now Lost]

I liked your rhyme scheme. The ending is strong and beautiful.