(Hopefully Not) A New Trend

My fingers are cold, my fingers are numb.

Why so sad, why so glum?

Maybe I'm lonely, maybe I'm gone.

Maybe I'll never again see the sun.

What is wrong with you?

Everything that I would do,

Everything I'm going through.

I know it's true,

That he could never love me too.

This is the end,

Say goodbye to your friends.

You'll begin a new trend,

This is the end.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[quarintine_deathangel]

You kind of have a point there. Really good comparison. Sry if you feel that way about things :/ Still a well written poem came out of it :) Nice Job and the flow was pretty good too. You have a certain style to your writing which makes it one of a kind :D

[The Winter Grey]

Really good, also something of a hopeless longing in this piece - it almost feels like "Part One" of your poem, "Facing The End." You write quite efficiently when detailing someone in a place of desperation. Also, I really like the title.