A Celebration of an Ending

just a random write

Bloodstained cigarettes and tear-soaked ashes lay scattered 

On the kitchen counter.

The steel-sharp knife drops, 

Clatters, 

And the purple vein in see-through skin explodes,

Erupts, 

Overflows.

Metallic despair takes the air.

Author's Note

reviews?

Reviews

[New Dawn]

ok, not much of a celebration, but very graphically and carefully done. Especially strong final line. I liked it despite its sombre subject. well written Kiara