Miss You More Than Ever

I've lost the ability to hope.

I've lost the ability to cope.

Every sound is your name,

Every person has your face.

I've gone and thrown it all away,

And it still must be my time to pay,

For I'm still drowning in pain.

I'm struggling for breath

But this dark emptiness just won't end.

Author's Note

I don't want people making hurtful comments so don't say anything if it's mean.

Reviews

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Whose been making hurtful comments? :c this is a sad poem that says you're in pain and need help anyone whose cruel enough to say something mean should be hit...I hope you're doing ok...

[Michael G.]

Such a sad poem.
It flows well... and the content is consistent.
Keep writing.