The New World

The New World

A Poem by Kiara
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I lost the first version of it, but this one is okay too

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The world is black, empty, and dark,
A place where evil lurks.
It has lost all hope,
We have lost our souls.
The rain covers
Our melted glass tears.
We have given in,
Let the dark take over.
It has invaded the hearts and minds of us all.
It has poisoned our every thought,
Ruined our every hope,
Turned our bright sun black and cold.
Hate has taken over.

© 2012 Kiara


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The world is much different than we expected it to be when we were younger. We expected the world to stay the same as we grew up, but we learn otherwise. We can't give in unless we want to give up. We lose if we decide to give in. If we want to live and fight, we need to fight with all we have. We can't afford to lose ourselves as the world gets worse, slowly but surely. We need to hang onto ourselves, our souls, our minds, thoughts and can't afford to depend on many others.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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The world is much different than we expected it to be when we were younger. We expected the world to stay the same as we grew up, but we learn otherwise. We can't give in unless we want to give up. We lose if we decide to give in. If we want to live and fight, we need to fight with all we have. We can't afford to lose ourselves as the world gets worse, slowly but surely. We need to hang onto ourselves, our souls, our minds, thoughts and can't afford to depend on many others.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so true, and beautiful Taylor. I love it.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..