Breathing It Into Me

Breathing It Into Me

A Poem by Kiara

No one can save this
Broken soul.
No one can mend
What once was whole.
I'm forever broken
And the sunlight is fading to black.
I am lost
And you can't turn back.
Stuck in the stars,
I don't belong.
I should be locked behind bars.
I'm too far gone.
The crystals are forming
Inside of my head.
I can see my dreams
And in them I'm dead.
This endless chaos
Of my screaming soul
Is lost.
It keeps begging for more.
Take away my pain
As you find your dying breath.
Snip that last vein
As you find you're breathing death.
You're breathing it into me,
And I can't escape.

© 2012 Kiara


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Kiara
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You're breathing it into me,
And I can't escape.

sublime...


Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Very dark but I love to read dark stuff and you delivered this very well.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It's enveloping, especially with your imagery. It kind of makes you feel like this is all happening and won't stop no matter what you do. "Death will begin, consume and continue" Really well written, thanx for writing it F[I.I]7

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVED THIS! I can really relate to this.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is so dark and so sad. I can really imagine this in my head especially the part where you described cutting the last vein.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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My name is Taylor Bigelow, I am eighteen and I absolutely love my boyfriend, my cats, music, writing, and playing my trumpet. Some of the bands I listen to are: Pierce the Veil, Sleeping with Sir.. more..