The moon's reflection

Its a sad poem.......

the moons reflection is my only light 

and soon it will be goodnight 

but when you close your eyes remember

that its my life in December

the ice cold snowflakes are calling my name

to join them in this weary game

the game on life the game of me the game of which everyone sees 

but what they dont see is my beautiful work but isn't that destiny

the beautiful work that said your words but isn't that absurd  

 on how this is my life that is now blurred

all because of your few words

Reviews

[Fox]

This is very deep, carrying feelings of sadness, loneliness, and maybe even remorse. Relatable and written simply, I like it.

[Ghost writer]

that's really good, I like the simple emotion and deep feeling

[J L Solomon]

I really like this poem, you should definitely keep writing. You made me feel the loneliness and the sadness. It was beautiful.

[otaku-chan]

It's really beautiful. It feels really lonely and quiet.

[taylor]

my first poem, sorry if it sucks.