What you taugh me

I was just another lost soul till i met you. You brought the life into my soul, the warmth into my heart the air into my lungs. You taught me how to live, how to love, how to care. You brought the truth to my eyes hidden in so much pain and to many lies. You stood by my side and held me tight. But now you stand so far away, and alone I stand  in so much pain and misery. I want the life to stop pulsing threw me, i want to stop loving and i need to stop caring. I dont want to say it but you've now taught me hate...

Reviews

[Not A Writer]

Love to hatred is such a strong emotion. Tis not true love but pain. I hope you feel better, Taylor.

[Silere]

There were a few grammatical errors and maybe a word or two missing. It's hard to say.. but I like where you were taking this poem. So much emotion and passion within your words. The last sentence was unclear.. I would like to see this again if you take a look at it and see that you meant to add a word or two. Keep writing from your heart as it's definitely your strength... Thank you for sharing!

[Elaine]

I like this. Make sure you put up more