Below Your Belt

This poem I have made to help the scars of Evil fade.

Everything I thought I knew,

 All the joy you overthrew, 

Because of what you know you did, 

A wall I built and all it hid, 

The scars you drew inside my soul, 

The hurt and pain cannot be told,

 But...

 Because of all you put me through,

 Crystal clear I see the truth,

 Through the walls and through the bars,

 Of the hurt and of the scarred,

 Because of you I can help,

 Those of them who have felt,

 And those who feel what I have,

 The evil that lives,

 Below Your Belt

Author's Note

This is a poem to Evil itself.

Reviews

[Tbear]

therapeutic and loving at the same time.. keep working through the pain, through the dark, and the poetry will evolve as well ..write on..

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This is very disturbing for me. Still i cannot understandt how come somebody can hurt at this way. Sometimes i feel world is full of evil. But still there is also lot of light. You write very well sad poems. I hope one day . You get also nice experience so you can write something more cheerful

[Taz]

yea me too...

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I am sure one day will happen. I wish you happines

[Taz]

Thank You for your kind words.

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You wellcome have nice day.

[Daphnee]

I may be older but certainly not as amazing as you are. You have so much understanding of deeper things and I love that! You speak of things that people have not thought of just yet. Your writing is so mature yet so innocent and sad. I cant bring myself to stop reading your stuff. Pure talent and so much potential!!

[Taz]

Thank you alot it means so much.

[andrew mitchell]

A sad write on abuse, has lovely flow without forced rhymes. One typo soal should be soul!

[Taz]

Thank you for your feedback I appreciate it.

[M.E.Lyle]

Growing up is hell, and I wouldn't go through what what you're going through right now for all the money in the world.
I enjoy being an old man, if only I could run as fast as I could when I was 20.
You lay things on the line pretty well.
Life gets better, believe me...or it should, anyway.
Have a great life.

[Taz]

Thanks again