A Plea

I am searching for a similar.

Have you felt the way I do,

 Can you see past and through,

 This sturdy wall that I have drew, 

Is Your soul scarred and wounded too,

Can you know it's lies I speak,

 Can you see i'm numb and bleak,

 Hurt and pained behind a smile, 

I laugh and sing all the while,

 I'm Dying!.. 

I'm dying while I await,

For someone,

 an unknown fate, 

Who maybe also can relate, 

To this hurt,

 this burning stake,

 That's Killing Me!

Author's Note

I just need to find someone who knows what it feels like.

Reviews

[Teddybearlee]

Very much a relatable writing. Souls, and scars, and wounds, definitely litter my writings as well. Very well written...such an alone feeling. Thank you for sharing, my thoughts are with you on finding what you seek, as many of us seem to be on similar missions in life. Be well, and keep writing!

[Taz]

Thank you very much, I always appriciate insightful reviews.

[Sofia]

Fabulous! This poem is so well written and the rhyming was amazing. I loved it. Your poems seem like you're writing what you feel like. Wonderful job!

[Taz]

I am writing how I feel, and thank for reviewing with your kind words.

[Sofia]

It was a pleasure to read this poem :)

[LKBillips]

Every scar is a mark of passage to the person you will be. Whether they are marks of honor or of burden is how you decide to deal with them. We are all behind masks. Your poem makes me hurt inside as I recall those thoughts from long ago. Just focus on your passions and your worth will show its face.

[Taz]

Thank you for all of your vocabulary lengthening reviews.

[LKBillips]

I know a lot of words...you ever need to borrow any you just let me know. :) I'm like a Thesaurus over here!! haha

[Taz]

Lol OK thanks

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Maybe one day you find somebody who can relate. Me personaly take over 20 years , than i find someone. Who realy carre and understandt what i feel. Poem have nice rhyming and is good for reading.

[Daphnee]

Wow. This sincerely left me speechless. I can defintely say that I know how you feel. Honey, you are not alone. This poem just speaks to me on so many levels and its like you are writing the very thoughts from my mind and my heart. Very well done. You are extremely talented and I see you going far as a writer.