Knife In The Fern

This is a true story//poem about what happned to me the other day.

There is a girl, I met with words,

 I'm fairly sure, she knows it hurts,

 Maybe she can't see how badly it burns,

 But the cuts and the bruises,

 they all take turns,

 Telling the stories,

 making others learn,

 While I am here with my knife in the fern,

 It's all the way down there, I dropped it for her,

 My friend, my mom, my sis and much more,

 I can't believe my knife's in the fern!

Author's Note

I made this out of a past expirence and some thoughts.

Reviews

[saeth]

Truly incredible! Takes on a new meaning every time I read it!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Why don't you try out writing lyrics or probably composing song! I mean it's wonderful.
Shouldn't it be "many more"


Keep going:)

[Taz]

no because she is all those things and much more to me.

[Coyote Poetry]

This is amazing poetry dear Taz.
"But the cuts and the bruises, they all take turns,
Telling the stories, making others learn, "
The above lines. Powerful and they told a complete story. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry. I did like this one.
Coyote

[Taz]

Thank You.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome Taz.