Unkept Tears

The scars of him still linger near,
Here comes the silent unkept tear,
And all the unrequited fear,
He has drawn upon me here,
To keep my mouth shut of the years,
He inflicted unkept tears.

Author's Note

Please tell me of any spelling mistakes. PS. If you don't get it don't think about it too hard.

Reviews

[Prototato]

Oh, my...
If this is at all accurate to you... I'm sorry.
A well-written and emotional piece for sure.

[Taz]

Thank you.

[Prototato]

Of course! ^^

[LKBillips]

I feel like there was a big exhale after this was out of your head. Clean and straight forward. Nice.

[Shasha]

It's pretty nice, the words were really very powerful. According to me, you described it very well. I loved it. Thank you very much for sharing... Keep writing!

[Taz]

Thank you for your support.

[Shasha]

Oh, you 're welcome. By the way, the review was obvious.

[Shasha]

Can't wait to review such poems!

[Taz]

Thank You.

[Shasha]

You know​, the worst thing, we have to type more then 10 characters. I can't only type " :-D "

[Taz]

lol yea thats why I put a . after thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

Unkept tears. They will fall sooner or later. I liked the story told in the poetry. Thank you Taz for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Taz]

Thank you for all of your great reviews.

[Coyote Poetry]

Was my pleasure and you are welcome Taz.

[CAPOLAVORO]

Oh I get your style now. Well, I want to try your shoes so I would like to say this one do grab some emotions inside. Great work in here. I do not need to think hard about this actually because it is beautifully related to reality. Thank you for sharing.

[Taz]

Thank you, sadly for some it is a reality.

[Najam Us Saher]

Beautifully expressed your emotions. I loved the second line. It clearly shows your pain and misery and your struggle.

[APOORVA]

Unkept..'
wow!
how have you managed to amaze me with this writing

[K.L. Ravns]

I am struggling to see the use of the word unkept. to me the definition of the word would be not maintained. Is there something I am missing.

[Taz]

Not kept inside and basically shed tears that are not taken care of.

[Ardra]

It's short yet to the point.... I enjoyed reading it...the unkept tears are the ones that reminds us we are still alive even after all the pain

[Taz]

This is true, thanks for reading.

[Surya]

Actually I found no mistakes, well it rhymed well, with exact meaning you tried to convey, hope so,....short but i liked it...:)

[Taz]

Thank you very much for your kind words.

[Surya]

You are welcome Taz..:)