Have you left?

You know who you are

Where are you my friend, my family,
Have you gone and just left me,
I can't do this oh so casually,
Cause without you I'm going to be,
Lost...

Author's Note

Seriously...

Reviews

[Michael Leon Wilson]

Short simple, powerful. I'd recommend using punctuation to create a better flow, the rhythm make the emotion

[Prototato]

Wow... such powerful writing. I can feel the force and meaning of the words.

[The Unforgiven]

Nice piece. Short, to the point and powerful. Keep it up

[mercy party]

this was a high quality poem.
it is hard to just stay cool and keep it all together when you don't have your person (that's what this reader felt). This poem successfully will speak to many. nice!

[Surya]

Taz, this shows a missing trait, short and simple but shows a lot...I think there is some mistake with spelling in family...nothing more, it is a good one...:)

[Taz]

Thanks I fixed it.