Luck

a quick and short write on Luck

luck isn't merely a game of time

it persists within us

enclosed in our fist

It wobbles through the veins

and imprints through the lines of our palm

Reviews

[EcstaticEuphoria]

Such a great poem, really love the words you used and the contemplation you conjured for us

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it :)

[keith]

we all carry our own luck ... some more than others
excellent pairing of image and message offered
your avatar speaks much of you

enjoyed thank you

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you for reading and reviewing! I really appreciate it:)

[TheUnrulyWriter]

Interesting view on luck! Never heard it explained in such a way, but I really like it. It's cool how you used "the lines of our palm" because palm reading tells you how long you're going to live, how healthy you are, etc. It makes perfect sense that luck would be there!!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

wow!
thank you so much:)

[Marvin Thomas Cox-Flynn..]

Words of wisdom from a young lady ... I suspect that we shape our futures by our decisions, our attitudes, our actions, and our compassion for our fellow man ... And fate and Karma decide the final outcome ... Good job ...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much! These words mean a lot to me.

[Inda]

Good piece, fine use of language and while it is short it is precise. Good job!

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much, it means a lot!

[Isabella Ivy]

This is neat! Nice comparison :) I.I.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :)

[Isabella Ivy]

You're welcome :)

[Zoya]

This is impactful! A short but potent write.

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you :)

[Surya]

I agree to your words....well done..
Thank you Tazeen for sharing..:)

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you Surya for the wonderful review!

[Surya]

You are welcome...:)

[DIVYA]

Great thought. A novel perspective on fate...

[Tazeen Ahmed]

Thank you so much!