Acid tears

A tear, it runs down your face when you're in pain.

Is it just acid water?

Or is it a part of your soul?

Leaving your body, making you feel more alone.

Reviews

[hanir]

Based on my personal experience... for the most part.. It is the liquid form of pain...
nice write!

[Robert Parlange]

It's amazing how much emotional pain hurts. I'd rather be punched in the face than have my heart broken. Actually, she sort of did both.

You have a very expressive style. Keep writing.

[Inject Positivity]

Beautiful one.....Loved the thought of acid in tears......

[Vishal Suthar]

Short and Sweet tells a lot....Nice

[Tanya]

Thank you. :)

[Adam Adams]

"A tear, it streams down your face,
when you're being in pain.
Is it just an acid? Or a drop of water?
Is it a figment of spirit?
Or just a glimpse of laughter?
A tear, it runs down your face,
when you're so in ache.
Is it an acid water? Or a part of your soul?
A tear, it rolls down your face..
Leaving your body lone... making you feel howl."

Your poetry hustled me to write all of these above words!
A very heartfelt poetry you've nailed up! When I was reading your write, I found the depth of your feelings in words... your feelings're written across the page... with very simplistic poetic-art. Liked the imagery!

[Tanya]

Thank you very much for the review. :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

I think tears are a part of our souls and crying does make me feel more drained, but sometimes in a good way. A release, if you will. Nice piece!

[Tanya]

Thank you for the review, it means a lot to know what people think of it. :)