Goodbye my enemy

This is written about my ex narcissistic girlfriend

Goodbye! goodbye! goodbye!

you have a hole that no one

Can fill. That not even love can 

Heal. you wanted my pain, but

Not my song. Not my smile but 

Bitter spite. You made me your 

Hell, but not your heaven. Stuck

 in an endless loop of darkness

And insanity. This tug of war with

My heart must End.  I will be free,

I will not let you take me down 

With you. Good bye my once love..

My enemy. 

Sept19,2017

Reviews

[olla]

"you wanted my pain but not my song..
you made me your hell but not your heaven.."

I found both of these lines particularly powerful.. this was not a long piece but every word is a testament to this: "This tug of war with My heart must End.
I will be free,
I will not let you take me down"

the ascension of the human spirit is an awesome thing to behold.. and I mean that sincerely..

"you haven't a hole"
I reluctantly question authors.. I think it's their story to tell.. however.. I can't seem to make this sentence fit.. did you intend to use "haven't" or perhaps it was the positive form of "have" that you intended..

[Tina]

Oh I will fix that error.. thank you

[olla]

well.. my comment didn't post as I intended either.. so there you are.. common ground.. I really liked your poem..

[Tina]

Thank you for reading I really appreciate it

[olla]

thank you for sharing it.. I really appreciate that..:)

[Einstein Noodle]

i like the courage i sense in this one .. especially as coming from a woman who was being used ... your heroine found her strength .. has picked up sword and shield ... engaged the battle for her very life .. both inside and out. Strong anthem in this says i ... straight and to the point ..read like prose
E.

[ved]

well, your poem is quite pretty.

[Tina]

Thank you , it was written at a not so pretty time in my life. I like how poetry helps people get through bad times like that.

[NotUsinganymore]

Interesting poem piece about an enemy. We all have our enemies it seems.

[Tina]

Thanks for dropping by

[NotUsinganymore]

You are welcome