Elements and disaster

Elements and disaster

A Poem by Tina
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Life is hard

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I bend like a tree even though I may break. 
I roll like the river and ride earthquakes. 
Buried by Avalanches of Doubt, Fighting hard 
to dig my way out. Over Troubled Waters I sail. 
In blinding fog I still prevail. No matter what 
elements come at me I pray to the lord on bended
 knee. wind and hail. bitter snow . I Look to God
 Wherever I Go. 
10/16/20

© 2021 Tina


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We all need a firm and steady hand holding ours at times. Perhaps too, truly believing that a prayer can be heard from the clamour of multitudes - as is happening now. For me. a walk, a stand and look, a feel and warmth that settles when I see the All About = comforting sights make warm memories and peace. Seems what you're meaning.. feeling and,, needing too. Thank you so very much Tina.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Tina. Take car, keep safe.



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We all need a firm and steady hand holding ours at times. Perhaps too, truly believing that a prayer can be heard from the clamour of multitudes - as is happening now. For me. a walk, a stand and look, a feel and warmth that settles when I see the All About = comforting sights make warm memories and peace. Seems what you're meaning.. feeling and,, needing too. Thank you so very much Tina.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
emmajoy

4 Years Ago

You're very welcome, Tina. Take car, keep safe.
Going with the flow and like you said look to God wherever I go. Great poem

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Yes, life can be very hard. The speaker here seems to have weathered much tribulation and now relies on a spiritual approach to life. Sometimes it is necessary to negotiate turbulent waters to find more peaceful ones.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thanks for reading
Sweet write...I go through avalanches of doubt, but I will find a way out...will prevail...
just have to.
j.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading
Laden with imagery is this write Tina to illustrate how tough life can be. Sounds as though you have a strong faith that will guide you through challenging times. Good write.

Chris

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
Well done. I like the spiritual content especially. Agreed!

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Prayer is a powerful tool in life. There are plenty of quotes from successful people on the advantages of utilizing it on the way forward in life.

Posted 4 Years Ago


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Tina

4 Years Ago

I agree. Thank you
Not religious myself, but I'm sure the great test of faith is faith itself.
If it doesn't kill you it will make you stronger. I don't know who said this first, but it always did my head in on long marches.

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Tina

4 Years Ago

Thank you for reading

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Hi I'm Tina. I've written short stories and poetry off and on for years. I enjoy reading poetry. A lot of my short stories do leave people wanting to know more, I like that. Whenever I try to write .. more..