Well of tears

Sadness can be overwhelming.

I fell into the well of Tears. 

Here I face My Darkest fears. 

No rope to climb to see the light,

to keep afloat I boldly fight. 

Trapped and  alone with nowhere 

to run. For someone's touch I 

desperately Long.

To hear a voice to lead me on. 

To find the strength to carry on. 

The taste of salt upon my tongue, 

Seep into my breathless lungs. 

Death for me is slow and cold. 

No more life I have to hold. 

As I think into the water of woes.

04/02/95

Reviews

[Raven]

Sadness - from what I've experienced - feels like a backpack full of bricks at times. As time goes on, that future seems like it will never be any better, only worse. And days just go on the same.

Sadness sucks. I've been there.

Fine writing, tina.

[Tina]

Yes sadness is not fun being in a well of tears is like you're in this pit of depression and you can't get out of it so eventually drowned if you don't overcome it

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[Tina]

I'm sorry I can't understand your writing

[John the Baptist]

This one has depression written all over it. That darkness is unrelieved, with no sign of the sun ever returning. Depressed people who kill themselves don't really want to die. It's just that the pain cannot be borne any longer.

[Tina]

My poem isn't really about killing your self

[Carlos Lorenzo Estrada]

Well written and heart-rending. Some of the deepest pain we can feel is the loss of love, or the betrayal of it. Despite its sadness I related to your words. Thank you for sharing this poem.

[Tina]

Thank you for reading

[Chris Shaw]

I felt the deep sadness in your lines Tina and know myself from past experiences how overwhelming it can become. All we can do is hope the darkness is not long lasting. Good to see a post from you.

Chris

[Tina]

Thank you Chris. For reading

[Chris Shaw]

My pleasure Tina.