Fade Away

The sun glistened through the window pane slowly creeping across my face

A gentle wake up call

 

The rays of warmth bring with it a memory of the night past with you

A smile looms on my lips

 

Stretching out across the bed gathering the blanket up high, burrowing deeper into soft pillows I sigh

 

Willing my eyes to stay closed, stay forever in this moment, the warmth that surrounds me I imagine your embrace wishing you here in my time and space.

 

Alarm goes off fantasy fading away to stay forever in your arms, your embrace

A cloud passes by taking away my sun and with it the warmth

 

I don’t want to wake from this feeling I struggle to stay here in this dream, pull me in closer tell me you’ll stay

 

But it’s just a dream and like the sun you fade away

Author's Note

Im sure my grammar leaves something to be desired lol..but I will thank all who critique and review .. Thank you!

Reviews

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This was a cool poem. I liked it

[Adam :P]

amazing imagery

[Candylove.]

easily one of my favorite writes! The imagery you create is stunning, I WANT to be in this poem. Seriously, thank you for writing this because it's beautiful. ha :)

[Alittlepertubed]

this is an amazing write i love your linesAlarm goes off fantasy fading away to stay forever in your arms, your embrace

A cloud passes by taking away my sun and with it the warmth


I don’t want to wake from this feeling I struggle to stay here in this dream, pull me in closer tell me you’ll stay


But it’s just a dream like the sun you fade away
these are so passionate and exoressive amazing poem

[KaySea]

very nice

[Greg Skura]

This is Very descriptive and conjures up images and feelings of wanting that feeling once again! Well Done! Thank you for sharing!