The beast

Emotional

It scratches and claws trying to escape but it only leaves scars of disappointment, Its screams are screams of pain and causes my skin to cry tears of red. It is an unleashed fury, It is an uncontrollable sorrow, It is untamed anger and pain. It is the beast inside, And it has control

Author's Note

Tell me what you guys think

Reviews

[Alexzandera]

Love it! However, if you want to improve I suggest working more on implicit vs. explicit writing (showing rather than telling). Instead of stating explicitly "It is untamed anger and pain," convey that through your description of the beast/scene.

[Abyss]

Thank you for the advice!!!

[Alexzandera]

Anytime :)