Fragments

Wrote this a long time ago and just tore it apart tonight. I'm very happy with the end product leave me some feedback if you agree or not.

Feeling…

Lost not sure were anything ends or when my experiences begin.

Lacking…

Understanding to why people don’t care for themselves or their fellow man.

Confusing...

Loneness and adolescence.

Surviving…

The silence and the thoughts that accompany it.

Fearing…

The demons that wake in my subconsciousness.

Hoping…

The phoenix in my heart will heal the wounds of the past.

Adapting…

To my present.

Mastering…

 The ever changing environment called life.

Learning…

My purpose in this life.

Observing…

The world around me.

Finding…

Familiarity in what I don’t understand.

Understanding…

The feeling of being alone fades with age and maturity.

Knowing…

Loneliness comes with age and maturity.

Thinking…

Set me free of my qualms, let them evaporate in the rivers of time.

Accepting…

Not rejecting the basic message a situation presents.

Exploring…

My journey, new and promising.

Praying…

My future holds my dreams and many answers along with it.

Hoping…

I have the capability to reach them.

Believing…

Reviews

[KWP]

I like this for it's honesty, I like this because I believe we can all relate to the constant battle of doubt and belief within our own minds, I am happy that it carries a message of hope a the desire to be more than the sum of oneself

I enjoyed the structure, making it easy to read

Most of all I enjoyed that it gives pause for reflection in one's own life x x

[Tech]

Thank you very much I feel like you nailed my purpose with this piece perfectly :).

[SquinklaPsyOps]

I like the poem, it raises the question that maybe evil stalks and tries to take advantage of persons that are alone, which there is nothing wrong with that as long as they dont try to take advantage of persons that choose to live alone.

[Tech]

Once again glad to see that my poem leaves itself open for interpretation of the reader's eye. It's simple was written to explain the experiences I have gone through as I have grown up and the way my thinking has changed since I was younger.