Karma's Lover

He exists in the catacombs

of my immortality

buried beneath the breast

of fate’s consecrated vein

His claret potions course

thru passages of hollow flesh

relieving my body

of frigid passions and desires

He infects my being with

a languishing presence

whispering breaths of light

into crevices of longings

and desperations that without him

would have succumbed to a

diseased core of cancerous misery

He manifests life…an innate

element essential for me to subsist

beyond pulses, palpitations,

and respirations

He is my yen…existing in

the catacombs of my immortality,

buried beneath the breast

of fate’s consecrated vein

waiting to be exhumed by destiny’s

promise to return his spirit

to me so that my soul

might live again. 

Reviews

[ElizaB]

Thanks for entering, it is very well written and descriptive :)

These four lines were my absolute favourite:

He infects my being with
a languishing presence
whispering breaths of light
into crevices of longings

Thanks again!

[Teeya]

So glad you enjoyed! Thanks for the comment:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Powerful, how am I just coming across your work? You truly write with a brilliant pen.

[Teeya]

So appreciative for you taking the time to read more of my work and finding it worthy of another gracious comment. Thank you:)

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It's a pleasure... I plan to view more.

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Wow Teeya! My gosh I love your style its powerful bold stands out loud with speaking. That was an unreal read:) Girl you hold the writers flame!

[Teeya]

Such a humbling comment...thank you:)

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Your welcome wow only 3 months lol to hear it , how you been?

[Teeya]

Yes it's been awhile since I've been here and I apologize for my delayed thank you:) Hopefully my mind is lucid enough now to post and read more often without another lengthy hiatus:)