Another Day

You take my breath away

and live on my pain...

I'd die for you today,

but I survive on the hope that

tomorrow you'll love me too...

Reviews

[Julie McCarthy (juliesp..]

this shows me someone who loves so deep she would die for him truly
he lives on her pain her longing to be loved it gives him satisfaction gratification
all she wants is for him to love her a little
great poem
thanks for entry

[Christopher Staab]

Lives on your pain, ouch. It might be destructive but what do I know. I love and am never loved back. Well done.

[Blank_fortunes]

I want the Author of this poem/Masterpiece to know that it is poems like this that make me believe that poems can stand next to statues in museums and draw tears from Large crowds. Thank you...

[Lady B]

Nicely written heartfelt deep yet lifting.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

small and sad...
dont know if i would call it a poem though.
Not much words there at all yet tells a big story.
Such sad, emotional, deep meaning put into just one little paragraph, that's what i like about this peace.

[Teeya]

There are so many styles of poetry that the length doesn't make it a poem, it's just usually the format might box it into a particular style. As long as you got something out of it, a paragraph is ok with me! Thanks for reading and I'm glad you enjoyed it:)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your welcome :) had allot of meaning to it :)
I enjoyed it :)