Where No One Sees

Where No One Sees
Just so brave
When you're alone-
Just so brave
When no one can see.

Kindness doesn't
Make up for lack
of ambition
Silly girl.

Walk, walk, walk
When you should
Run, run, run.
Don't you cry-
Blink them back-
Those pointless salts.
They've heard it all
Before.

They're all sick
Of your s**t.
Laugh d****t,
Shrug your f*****g shoulders
AND LAUGH!

Be good
Be better
Be Best.
Be liked
Be loved
Be wanted.
Be Brave
Just so brave
Where no one
Can see.
 

Reviews

[S. P. Vaporis]

is this the reflection speaking to its shaded self? i get the feeling of the speakers disappointment in this write. good job on this one. i enjoyed it. ~peace~

[Brentley]

I love the internal argument going on here. How your stronger voice commands the weaker person. I only know to well what this is like, how terrible it is to go through something like this.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

It's hard spmetimes when we feel the weight of the world is on our shoulders and we must hold it in... excellant work.

[Klyn]

They couldn't fit all this on my prescription bottle of Ativan....but oh they should!

Awesome!

[R J Askew]

This reminds me of times when i have tried to talk myself into being something i am not. I've given up now and just take what shows up! the whole self-help industry doesn't get a penny of mine now.

[Fran Marie]

Very well expressed and penned so nicely~ThX for sharing~Fran Marie

[Michael X]

first impressions, speaks the
creative heart with talent
naked passion, the messege
speaks with insight and clarity,
the wording and form is as equally
impressive, brilliant work, peace,mike

[Shane Patrick]

the temptation of some to be better and then level themselves on high, nice write my friend very well done!