Beautiful, Living, Young

Go away beautiful,
Go away young,
Go away living,
Long after life is done.

 

Go on being beautiful,
Go on being young
Go on living
Long after life is gone.
 

Keep on being beautiful
Keep on being young
Keep on living life
Even when life is through-

 

Eternally be beautiful,
Eternally be young
Eternally be living
Thats how I'll remember you.

Reviews

[Gandré]

This composition is so simple and so unique. Small bejeweled wishes fill the lines of this almost fatalistic drum, ending in adoration. Thank you so much for reviewing and rating my new poem! much love, lara

[T. L. O'Neal]

This was a sweet poem and I liked the repetition of the piece. The finish was great. T