My heart races

 My heart races

 When I think of you

 My heart races

 When I think of you

 I remember how I laughed

 When I think of you

 There isn't anything else

 I'd rather think about

 Maybe 

 I'll just sit here 

 Maybe 

 Just think of you

Reviews

[Tom McRoberts]

Wonderfully inspired use of repetition (and colour too, for that matter), you've made the poem itself a heart with its own beat! Great stuff, keep it up!

[Teresa Powell]

Well thank you!