So Can you?

Hey!

Hey!

Listen up

Listen to the words that reside within you.

Your soul is speaking out to you.

Stop

And listen.

It is trying to guide you.

Can you handle it?

Can you handle what you are about to see?

What you are about to hear?

Tell me!

Can you handle,

Facing the true you?

Well?!

CAN YOU!

Author's Note

Trying something new hope you like it.
~Resnera

Reviews

[Emerald Seas]

Very different! Great questions everyone should ask themselves. I've met many that go through life not having a clue who they are... So sad and such a waste.

[Just Kim]

A powerful nice read, much enjoyed : )

[Jack...]

Definitely different and definitely cool. Nice work.

[Lina Grey]

NO. lol jk,,, a very inspirational poem. it reminded me of that part in Finding Nemo where they go down into the darkness and Marlin pretends to be Dory's conscience. Following this, I'd say Dory's true self is a giant hungry pointy-toothed fish with a glowy little light... it sounds about right XD beautiful hun

[B-poet]

Very unique and lively in regards to listening too that inner voice within yourself so you divulge into what lies ahead down the road of your life. Great job here. :)

[Rita L. Sev]

A different kind of piece - urgent, read in statements rather than with fluidity - it adds to the overall effect of the poem. Spelling - listen, I think, is what you were going for. Overall, a powerful piece.

[TLK]

The punctuation stops there from being a flow and makes it very direct, almost shouting -- I think this is the experience you were going for.

I think this is a typo: "And listing." If it's not I can't quite make sense of it.

[NITHIN PURPLE]

good!

[Sami Khalil]

Very artistic and hope wisdom-filled. Thank you for sharing...:)

[s y e]

this was a powerful write. powerful words. Nicely done.