Flutter

I was inspired by the picture that I had taken a while ago and just suddenly felt the urge to write about it.

Trembling wings unfurl

The sun breathes life into the tiny beauty

Drops of dew hover on the flower peatals as the whole world holds its breath

With a tiny shake the butterfly greets this next stage of life

Quietly and calmly taking in its world with

A flutter of its shimmering wings.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this at around 11 pm so it will need some editing eventually. Please excuse mistakes!

Reviews

[Adiel]

Thats beautiful.

[kayama]

its a good poem, It holds some sort of good feeling to it.

[Phoenix]

It's a true test of a good poet to be able to write an awesome poem so late at night, so congratulations! You write wonderfully, so simple, yet so terrific!