Nature's Evening Beauty

This is inspired from a landscape that I draw. It's about the only thing I can draw. And no, I do not have a picture of it.

See the pines rise high above,

To meet the Moon and Stars above.

See the mountains in the distance,

Reaching up to touch the Moon and Stars.

See the Moon bathe my mountain's side,

With her blue-white light,

So bright and calm.

Hear the mountain stream flow sweet,

From the snow peak to the mountain lake bottom.

Hear the weeds and grass and cat-tails stir,

As the gentle wind bends them to his will,

To and fro they stir.

Hear the silence.

So peaceful here.

Here on my mountain's side.

As I wait for the Sun to rise.

No cricket's song,

No nightingale's voice,

Disturb this serene landscape.

Here I lie,

Bathed in the Moon's blue-white light,

Waiting for dawn to silently sound.

Here I lie,

As the Wind combs my hair,

Waiting for dawn to silently break.

Here I lie,

In Nature's arms so dear.

Here I lie,

In Nature's evening beauty.

 

Reviews

[Desert Dreamer]

A beautiful vision...it has been a long time since I slept in the arms of the mountain, it is a wonderful comforting place to be.

[Your Tasty Field Adviso..]

night time can be such a spleandor of beauty. more so than day time, in my opinion. i love the feeling throughout this poem. you wrote a wonderful poem.

This is very beautiful. I loved the details, the image. This is very good. Great job!

[Cats Eye]

Once again great write, I enjoy how rich you make your details, and how clearly the visions come to me as my eyes scan these lovely words that you've written. I enjoyed reading these as I'm sure countless others will, great job.