Jūjika

A Poem by Texas

Another poem written like a haiku.

jūjika.

Burdens a wall.

Burdens a chain around a neck.

Burdens the skin.

Showing salvation.

Saving grace.

Ever lasting soul.

A cross.

© 2009 Texas

Author's Note

Whadda ya think?

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Very nice. :D
I like the way it's written, how it all directs back to the first word.

Or, maybe I'm looking at it wrong. xP

Posted 16 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Fanciful Goddess

nice very nice. good work!

Posted 16 Years Ago

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Added on February 12, 2009
Last Updated on October 14, 2009

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Texas

Huntsville, TX

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going to Sam Houston in Huntsville, Texas to get a Bachlor's in English with a minor in Secondary Education; my goal is to get my Master's in Library Science; love sheep, cats, wolves and other animal.. more..