Morning Fog

Morning fog hangs thick and low,

Damping the ground, the skin.

Water droplets decorate spider's webs,

That adron trees, plants and building corners.

Morning fog hang thick and low,

Obscuring the ugly world,

Revealing the beauty of nature.

Reviews

[A]

I can really see all of this: the point formish style you've been using in your last few poems has been really quite amazing. Ahh, this brings back so many fond memories of camping...

It also makes me think of that "pre-dusk" sorta stage in the sky after a long rain or a thunderstorm and the air is humind and blablabla, I'm sure you get the idea.

Anyway, as always, really, REALLY, fantastic work sis. o.o

[Crow]

What beautiful imagery you piant from the colors of your literary palette.

[deeps]

I like the style of this write, You plant such a wonderful imagery as well.
Amazing write.

[Tina Kline]

This creates a beautiful picture too. I see a lot of fog and spider webs look very pretty with they have fog,moisture beads clinging to them. I really like this poem too!

[Fran Marie]

Great imagery within this short piece~well crafted~ I like it

[NinjaPi]

Beautiful poem with wonderful imagry.