The Carousal Poem

An aeronautical adventurer leaves the ground, dauntless like me

Raised to an aerial plane like a bird in a tree

Careless and jubilant no other way to describe thee

As she swivels and sways with a force we can’t see

We wait on our tip-toes for our turn at ride

As she gets off with her daughter beside

Reviews

[Lola_Bee]

love this, its elevating and fun. your words are also put together so well, dautless like me, love it

[ThackeryBinx]

Thanks Lola, it was for a contest but I guess I didn't win. Glad you liked it :)

[Lola_Bee]

Don’t feel bad, I haven’t won a contest to date 

[ThackeryBinx]

It's hard to believe that you haven't won anything yet. I mean your writing is orgasmically good and I put your up there with the best I've seen here. Thanks again