Love Poem

It's about a wonderful feeling I get from this girl.

She sings to me with words as beautiful as the morning light, her heart as pure as the warmth delight.

Melting my heart as I read each line, her poems are like meat to this hungry lion.

Her skin is as honey, an uncommon thing where she’s from,

Though I’d wish to visit her I fear she’d turn away and run.

She does make my heart ever so light, I will always wonder all throughout the night. 

Reviews

[FallenAngel43]

simple and sweet, something a girl can appreciate.

[Lola_Bee]

Beautifully put together and intriguing. Seems like a secret crush, well written

[GreenEyes]

Very sweet poem. My favorite lines are the first and last ones. They seem to tie everything together.

[Duckey]

Amazing poem, loved reading it so much. Flows a little oddly, but still wonderfully written! Keep writing x

[ThackeryBinx]

Thanks so much Duckey. I will post a edited version soon. I want to make it flow smoothly. Much appreciated.