Lingering Heart

Reminiscent of the love that,

fate judges me undeserving of.

As time is slipping through my gripping

Hoping with a watery tear in my eye,

that I may find love before I die.

Reviews

[Lola_Bee]

Sweet, touching and beautiful. How many emotions can emanate from few words

[GreenEyes]

Very emotional and powerful. Extremely well written. It's a poem that strikes a chord with me. Nicely done.

[ThackeryBinx]

I'm glad you liked it. We are connected now. You know my inner feelings now that you have read this. Thanks.